Author's Note: This assignment was to create a essay conclusion by restating the thesis in a different syntax, have it be consistent, and to leave the essay with a moral like comment. I think that this conclusion is not good because it was hard to work without body paragraphs leading up to this point in the essay. I would like to have feedback on the moral like ending in the conclusion.
Whatever language you speak or what color your skin, music connects us all. It is the one thing that we all have in common. It breaks down the walls of anger, fear, and sadness; music helps us get through everyday life.
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