The flow of music into the ears of everyone around you every day makes you think, “What are they listening to?” There are so many different kinds of music and every single song has a meaning that is interbred in a different way. You have your own choice, because it does not matter if you love or hate it; Music and will be in everyone’s hearts for eternity.
This sounds like it could be a very deep and insightful concept. Consider how you can turn it into a persuasive hook. Why is music so meaningful? How can it change peoples' lives? If you were to continue this as an essay, what would your thesis statement be? (Think of a thesis statement as a question you spend the rest of your essay answering. What question would you want to explore?)
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